Tuesday 10 May 2011

KANAVU- indha story nama 12th standardla paducha storydhan but i like that story so much so wrote again

Indha naatula iruka Ovvoru middle class makkaloda kuranjabacha kanavu aasai ellame eppadiyachu oru sondha veedu vanganumnudhan..... velaikedachu thannoda sondha oora vitutu velai kedacha oorla vadagaiku irukuravanga padra kashtam konjananjamilla. Sevathula oru aany adikaradhula irundhu thanni pudika motor podura varaikum ellathukum house ownerta ketudhan seiyanum.. House owner eppa sonnalum veedu galipanitu poganum.. Ennoda appa indha ooruku 20 varushathuku munnadi vandharu avar dunlopla accountanta vela patharu.. indha irubadhu varushathula naanga ombodhu veedu maritom.. Enga appavum epadiyavadhu oru sondha veedu vanganumnu romba kashtapataru..andha timela Avadila ara-ground 50000 rubai adha eppadiyavadhu vanganumnu pala edathula panam ketu parthar engayum kedaikala, avar thaniyar companyla velai pathanala avaruku endha banklayum loan kedaikala, adhanala enaku avar romba kastapatu government velai vangithandhar. Elu varushathuku munnadi avar irandhutar.. Appa irandhu 2varashathula enga ammavum irandhutanga.. Ipa avadila ara-ground 3latchathuku mela irukum.. Ennoda friend moolama oru nalla edam irukunu kelvi paten andha edathula irundhu 10nimisha tholaivulaye bustand irundhuchu,thannium nalla irundhuchu epadiyachu indha edatha vanganumnu mudivu pannunen.. Nanum en friendum idathukararta pesi kadaisila rende-mukkal latchathuku andha nilathai ok pannunom.. Ennoda savings, Appavoda savings, ammovoda nagainu ellathayum vachu idatha vangitaen aana adhula veedu katta enkita suthama panamilla...



Ipodhaiku Chinnadha oru hall oru bedroom oru kitchen bathroom kattanumnu nenachakooda koranjadhu 2arai latchamachu venum. Bankla loan ketadhuku ondra latchathuku mela tharamudiyadhunu sollitanga.. Ennoda manaiviyoda nagayellam vachakooda 50000 rubaiku mela kidaika vaipilla.. Personal loan oru 25000 rubaiku vangikellam meedhi panathuku engayavadhu vattikudhan vanganum.. Ennoda friend Indha madhiri kadan vangi veedu katunan kadaisila kadana katta mudiyama vangana veetaye vithu kadana ellam adachan, adha ninaikumbodhu kadan vangi veedu katidalama illana oru 5varusham kalichu kattalamanu nenachaen aana 5 varushathula sengal cement vilai ellame eridum apaveedu katnalum kadan vangidhan katanum adha ipave senja masam masam vadagai panamavadhu minjumnu nenachu sondha karanga friendunga kita kadan vangikalam apavum pathalana kadaisiya kandhu vattiku panam vangikalamnu mudivu panninen.. Mudhalil bankla loan ketu vandha kaasula asthivaram potu arambichom.. Veedu katta arambicha konjanaluku piragudhan na nenachadha vida mela 50000 extra selavagum.. Bank loanla kedacha amountla pillar potu sidela suvar elupi keela padhi veedu katti muduchom. Manaiviyoda nagaiya vachadhula kedachadha vachu mela thalam pottachu.. Nalla tilesa podanumna vilai adhigamagumnu sonnanga veedu kata poradhu oru vaati nalladhe potuduvomnu mudivu panni veetuku thevayana ellathayum naane paathu paathu vangunen.. Personal loan, friends sondha karangakita vanguna panathula mukkavaasi veeta katti muduchutaen..



Innum 50000 irundhadhan veedu fulla katti mudikamudium. Kandhuvattiku panam vanguradha thavara enaku veravali illai.. Enga oorla irundhavarta vattiku kaasu vangi veetoda kadhavuku jannaluku thevayana maram vangunom, veetuku sea blue colourla paint aduchom.. Ivlow kashtapatu veedu katitan aana adhuku graha pravesham panna mudiyalanu nenachu kitu irukumbodhudhan vadaga veetukararta enga appa kuduthirundha 5000rubai advance panatha kekalamnu mudivu panni ketan avarum periya manasoda veedu kali pandrathuku munnadiye kudutharu.Nalaiku ennoda sondha veetuku grahapravesam.. Inniku nightudhan na vadagai veetla thoongura kadaisi night aana thoonguvananu theriyala.. Enga appa kanda kanava nalaiku na nenavakaporen.. Ore chinna sondha veedu katnadhuku ivvalavu scene podanumanu mathavanga yosikalam aana oru sondha veetoda madhipu vaadaga veetla irukavangalukum, irundhavangalukumdhan therium....................................................................................

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